Comments on: Soundslide crit http://deelite.wordpress.com/2007/10/25/soundslide-crit/ A place for online pursuits Sat, 24 Nov 2007 17:51:07 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Mindy McAdams http://deelite.wordpress.com/2007/10/25/soundslide-crit/#comment-9 Mindy McAdams Sat, 03 Nov 2007 19:36:03 +0000 http://deelite.wordpress.com/2007/10/25/soundslide-crit/#comment-9 Hey, Rati, the Soundslides you critiqued was by Saman. It is true we have a student in our class whose name is Sanam. Very confusing, I know. But Sanam did the Turkish family in UF Family Housing, and Saman did the women at Ramadan story. Hey, Rati, the Soundslides you critiqued was by Saman. It is true we have a student in our class whose name is Sanam. Very confusing, I know. But Sanam did the Turkish family in UF Family Housing, and Saman did the women at Ramadan story.

]]> By: ratikumar http://deelite.wordpress.com/2007/10/25/soundslide-crit/#comment-8 ratikumar Thu, 01 Nov 2007 04:52:52 +0000 http://deelite.wordpress.com/2007/10/25/soundslide-crit/#comment-8 The reason I wanted to watch this slide was because I reviewed a slide by Sanam on the same festival, but with a female subject. I was interested in knowing if and what differences there were. Getting back to Denise's critique, I don't necessarily disagree/ agree with her comment about "missing a main character". I am just a little intrigued. It seems like this balance between a profile and an on campus activity is really difficult to bridge. I know that mine went overboard with the profile aspect, so it was interesting to see what Denise thought was too little of one person. I am sure there is no magic number of formula to saying this is either a profile or on campus activity. It just seems to me sometimes, that in this soundslides attempt, like all else in life, nothing succeeds like success. The reason I wanted to watch this slide was because I reviewed a slide by Sanam on the same festival, but with a female subject. I was interested in knowing if and what differences there were.
Getting back to Denise’s critique, I don’t necessarily disagree/ agree with her comment about “missing a main character”. I am just a little intrigued.
It seems like this balance between a profile and an on campus activity is really difficult to bridge. I know that mine went overboard with the profile aspect, so it was interesting to see what Denise thought was too little of one person. I am sure there is no magic number of formula to saying this is either a profile or on campus activity. It just seems to me sometimes, that in this soundslides attempt, like all else in life, nothing succeeds like success.

]]> By: ealnashmi http://deelite.wordpress.com/2007/10/25/soundslide-crit/#comment-6 ealnashmi Sun, 28 Oct 2007 04:57:10 +0000 http://deelite.wordpress.com/2007/10/25/soundslide-crit/#comment-6 Yeah, I knew I was missing the UF aspect of the story, especially with the audio, which was basically juts information about Ramadan. I tried fixing that problem by using pictures of UF students, but I guess it didn’t work. I also agree with you that the main character was missing in the pictures—I only used four pictures of him—but I got to be honest with you: I think I took more than 100 pictures of my main subject and all but a few were blurry. Thank you for your comments Yeah, I knew I was missing the UF aspect of the story, especially with the audio, which was basically juts information about Ramadan. I tried fixing that problem by using pictures of UF students, but I guess it didn’t work. I also agree with you that the main character was missing in the pictures—I only used four pictures of him—but I got to be honest with you: I think I took more than 100 pictures of my main subject and all but a few were blurry.

Thank you for your comments

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